Here is a fine example:
Sample A
One late night, while walking home, I stumbled upon this beauty (sample A) at Place de la Concorde. I was immediately attracted to her because of the mystery. Who are you? Where do you come from? And what are you doing here? The less she revealed the more I desired.
Sample B
The following night, having taken the same route home, I ran into her again (sample B), but this time she had changed. She was still undeniably beautiful, however, the mystery was gone. In the brief moment it took me to recognize her, I had already figured her out. Her purpose was clear and without another thought, I walked on.
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